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Old 06-13-05, 09:14 AM   #8
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Voted For: Stanza

This Dude Is Bad Huh...Not A Win On his Record .........not Even In Graphics
Sufficate Yo Lyrics Like Plastic its Real Drastic Then Dump Yo Body Like Ashes
6...not the best of punches, but you did throw a nice multi in there which made it good, punch cud be more hard hittin.
See when Spit Ima make you fade Away like the Pic Of Tupac & Big In Ya Sig
If Wackness Came In Slides Then We All know Youd Have the Most Skids
6...decent punch, the slide concept was clever and worded well, not really feelin the setup though.
Dude Lets face Reality You Really dont Have any Rap or Hip Hop Talents
They Call You Tipsy Bcuz when I Spit I Leave "ROB" "R"eally "O"ff "B"alance
7...better, decent bit of wordplay and a hard hitting punch.
Its comin Down To an End So I guess I Can ease of The gas Pedal Of Skills
If Dopeness Was a Car Then Your Escort Wouldnt make Evenit up The Hill
5...nah!! i get the car concept, it was kinda weak though and the setup was bleh!!
Your Not In Area So Ima Bout To Bury Ya Like Gurls dat Wont Marry Ya
Ima Tarry Up and Then Tear it Up Like You was tryin To Stear It up
5...again, seems kinda choppy and not that creative, seems like you just fell off at the end.

OVERALL: 29/50




Stanza...I'll 'Defocate On your Brain' To Give You Some 'Shit To Think~About'...
Only Way You Get Twisted Is When Your Clothes Are Ringing~Out...
6...decent opener, gud piece of wordplay and the first line i thought was dope.
Your Rhymes Aint Heavy Weight Dawg I'll Legally Box~Ya...
I'm Burning Your Ass So Hard They Labelled me the Hot~Stuff...
3...WACK!!! setup was ok, but then you self-glorified in the 2nd line so weak as hell!!
Watch~out This Is A 'Hot~Bout'...But Your Fire's Gettin 'Stomped~Out'...
I'm Rising Coz I'm Smoking But You Hoping You Dont Get Knocked Out...
5...not so much directly self-glorifying but its still there, nice wordplay though.
Your Vocab Wouldn't Be Ill If I Soaked Your Brain~In~Puke...
You Firing Blanks Dawg And I'm Aiming~Nukes...
4...WTF!!! ill/sick lines are so fuckin played, ya gotta come with more originality than that.
You Need To Get Training~Troops...If You Wanna Beat~Me...
Or Your Gonna Have To Hire An Assassin To Do It Discreetly...
5...weak, rhymin was not too basic, but then the punch itself was wack.

OVERALL: 23/50


ok battle....
stanza started good, decent wordplay with some nice concepts for punches but fell off to the end
maverick had a dope opener, then came wack the rest of the verse, self-glorifying and played concepts aint gonna win ya battles so next time dont do it.......

V/ - Stanza

RTF!!! daubs battle plz!! links in my sig!!
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