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Old 06-13-05, 11:17 AM   #11
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Xenofly: Listening...beat is some old skool vibe...weerd English accent...quality is hmm...it's ok ya know...punches are hmm...ok could be improved...lol @ careless album taste...nice rhyming...hip hop flip flop lol...hmm could be better beat kinbda dragged you down it was too basic not much to really gain emotion on ya know...but it's not a bad piece...ok moving on...actually ima listen again...rhyming is aight...feelin the flow it's good too close to the mic hearin a lot of hissin ya need to be further from it...specially the H's...Jay-Z line again...kinda repetative...i learned not to keep on the same thing...it's aight but like i said beat held ya back IMO...NOW moving on...

DaCument:...1st the verse is longer...always an advantage using the time you have unless you KNOW you dropped a BOMB on ya opponent in minimal time...to the verse...lol @ the intro...singin Kanye style...vocals...flow is nice...1st 4 bars mostly self-glory...really hmm a few played bars...lol @ soccer i woulda said football whorin UK...and i am UK...this really isn't a diss track you got mostly self-g...then like 1 diss every 3rd bar...overall a good track...but not a good diss track...

V/xenofly...not expecting no RTF...or if so...then hit my song...Thoughts
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