This is a very outstanding piece very visual words used in this alot of strong vocab usage the content of the piece was remained in a strong topic that was very useful and stayed on topic very good structure was good but the best line i liked from this piece i was like sayin wooohhh like vey deep
"Attempt to escape this dull existence through the old heroic tales
But the evanescence can't be stopped,slowly washing away all details"
that was a good line keep doin ur thing this piece was very good this deserves to be in THOF this was an outstanding piece alot was perfectionist words used and everythin was like Woah! i like this alot cant wait to see another topic like this one i enjoyed reaidng this piece.

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