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Old 06-13-05, 04:48 PM   #11
Adam
 
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Both of these punches could have been better..

C.A.L.I

Throw spek through the air chop up his style as confetti to celebrate
Look at his avy..... his pen game gonna take a long while to elevate

^ That was forced as fuck. The First line is streched, and ruins the flow. I have also seen the same concept used by you before against Spektikul..

Spektikul vs C.A.L.I
Was never no hate i always thought youd shine in time
But you aint never elevate even ya avys pen is behind in times

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181113

Spektikul
. . Battling for bronze? He's already a HW, check the size of his trousers . .
. . Cali got a job working in a bar, now both him and his titties are the bouncers . .

^ You could of worded this way better because the flow is off in the second line. Somewhat streched, but not that bad. The wordplay is half deecent, bouncing titties are pretty sweet ...and the wordplay bout him being a HW, but it's a played C.A.L.I concept. Would be a great punch if it wasn't against C.A.L.I... But meh...

My vote goes to Spektikul because I haven't seen his punch before, and I thought it was better anyways..

Vote: Spektikul