lol, this was fucking dope man, flow was craaaaaaaaaaaaaaazy, and the wording was good, structure everything, I really can't find much wrong bout this, and im not just saying that cuz we coo', I really like this line:

But we were still young, what really did we know?
With hands intertwined, but still nowhere to go..

and the closer was illy, when I write, that my fav. part is the closer, I always try to make it with an impact or like a coo' closer that says something, it was dopeness, 8.7895/10 weerd

rtf in poetic scriptures, "A Wilted Rose" done under the acount of ~Ronin~ weerd

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