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Old 06-13-05, 06:16 PM   #10
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Voted For: R-Rated

King Solos Verse

Ya audio is wack, that’s why they tried hidin ya tracks on the mix-tape..
Cudn’t get ya ‘shit on lock’ if ya ‘took a dump in a fuckin Scots lake’..
^ Nice opener good punch/personal

Ya text crew battles get you into heaven, I don’t mean ya spittin well though..
Its just ya put ya name up for a text spot, and everybodies like “HELL NO!”..
^ Good bar aight punch

Try to hide bein a retard…switched the letters round to make ya name..
Name used to be half ‘text’ but ya still ‘lay’ it like ya usin’ half ya brain..
^ aight bar again good punch flipped the name as well

5 votes to win a battle…funnily enough Rated’s referrals have got 5 hits..
Not to imply that you cheat…more like why you still bringin more shit..
^ lol @ this quick to rid any fake personal and flip into a punch/personal

Like the shit in ya sig ya can’t ‘raise the bar’ cuz lyrically ya lines fall..
Forever dwellin’ on the past……………………………………… ………
Cuz vote-wise you’ll always be wonderin why ya never got five-for..
^ ooo good closer nice verse

Overall
Good verse Solo feelin the disses in this been a while since i seen a consistant verse nice flow structure even but i think ya layout could be better than the basic...rhyming was a bit basic but other than that good verse

R-Rateds Verse

You Winning Hands Down??...Equipped Wita Solo King Back-To-Back...
Watch Me Draw and Fold Kings Quick..Rateds Facts Are Ace-Stacked..
^ meh @ self-glory opener coulda been better fam

Kid You Couldn't Knock Me Out...Even If You Were Jahovas Witness..
Could Lace Ya Punches With Disease..and Still Not Spit Verbal Sickness..
^ 2nd line nice 1st line started hmm but punched...

Claim To Be The Open Mic Comdeic Genius...but Ya Speks Are Broke..
But I Guess That Name Does Fit You...Cause All Your Texts' A Joke..
^ good personal flipped the title

This Battle Is A Complete Upset..Like Premature Ejaculaters In Orgies..
And By Married To The Game..King Solo Will Be On Rapvese Till He's 40..
^ ooo good punch lol like this...

I'll Pave A Highway To Hell In Chinese Subscript To Leave You Fo-Kissed..
You Claim The King Has Returned...It Must Hurt That Nobodies Noticed..
^ OH nice closer...good personal lol i actually OH'd at that lol

Overall
Nice verse again consistant nice punches both flowed well R's layout was better flowed slightly better too IMO...punches...R-Rated's closer & 3rd bar killed it...real creative nice rhyming too...so basically vote goes to

V/R-Rated...this is an RTF vote so no RTF expected...but manners people
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