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Old 06-13-05, 06:19 PM   #10
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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Its ya boy BIG Spook doin his thang
If .Barz Of Steel. dont live in fame im da one to blame
3/10...No Comment
cuz imma fuck up his game... no matter da circumstances
you see .Barz Of Steel. falls down and BIG Spook advances
3/10...You Comin Weak, & You Talkin About Yaself More Than Bars
ill break through ya bars like a drill through dirt
ill be your worst thrill until ya mind starts to hurt
1/10...Weak Lines
dont bother battling back... save yourself the humiliation
yo lines are straight up wack... your just a discrimination
1/10...Had No Real Meanin You Jus Tried 2 Rhyme
that verse is a wreck... and now im through
im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2
2/10...1st Line Stretched As Fuck, 2nd Not Worded Well


This dude's the best? dawg ya horrible, I heard ya flow
And you couldn't "raise a roof" sittin in "convertibles"
5/10....Heard Diff Lines Thats Similiar So Nothin New 2 Me
Intimidating? Please, watch me murk this shallow teen
Who couldn't get a "Big Spook" if it was "Halloween"
6.5/10...Nice Play On His Name
You've got shit text, so how can you claim to be a big threat??
When your record is "0-2" you don't even have a win yet!!
7/10...Good Personal
Watch me murder this man, You're unheard of, this herb'll get slammed
Shit, you wouldn't "drop hot" if it was "burning your hands"
7/10...Anotha Tight Line
All your battles suck, you acting like it's all about fun
But when I say your "text blows" dawg I ain't "talking bout guns"
6.5/10....Clever But Worded Funni


Punches: Bars
Personals: Neitha
Creativity: Bars
Structure: Neitha
Multiples: Neitha
Wordplay: Bars
Enjoyment: Bars

OVERALL VOTE: .Bars Of Steel.


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