Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Barz Of Steel

I done tore this kid, lyrics swarmed this bitch
And please, you about as street, as a forest is

No..I wasnt feeling this. The concepts were too basic and you should have came harder here.

So dawg, don't be stupid, ya tough talk'll get beat stupid
Plus ya 'Tough Guy Front' is "Ghost" cuz I "See Thru It"

Again, no. This didnt flow well because you said "stupid" twice in the same bar and it screwed things up. You should have changed the content here.

I'll put the nine to ya melon and lungs, this fella's a thug?
How? When he wouldn't "Lick A Shot" with the "Shell On His Tongue"

Lol..this was actually pretty nice. I havent heard it before..original.

So guy stop, this guy's hot? This kid'll get five shots
That'll leave his "casket in the clouds" Thats what I call a "Sky Box"

This was alright I guess. Nothing that great..just average.

All your punches are half baked, He says he's real, but this cat's fake
So I'll leave this kid's "Body Sitting In a Bag" Like a "Sack Race"

AVerage.

This ho will get killed, how is this kid flowing with skill?
When my mama always told me as a child that a "Ghost isnt real!"

Ehh, this was OK. Alright finisher.

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Ghost

Have Ya "down-n-Quick", not up n Runnin like Ya Internet connection
Watch Me KO you With "Votes",But Best Believe Im not Runnin For Election

Umm, no. This was weak. It didnt really hit at all. Wack opener.

Im Steady "Weldin" Rhymez Apart Quick,Cuz Supposely Ya Barz-of-Steel
i Advice You To bring paramedics,Cuz therez Gon Be Dozenz Of -Scarz-to-heal-

I wasnt feeling this either. This wasntn hard at all. Way too basic and didnt hit.

Complicationz Of Spitting,Like A Dry MOuth Of a Hard Workin Athletic
You should Retire BEING A ROOKIE,Cuz Ya Lyriks Are Just Plain Basic N Pathetic!

This was too basic. Not hard at all.

Use Ya Verse For Basic Teachin,But Use Ya Mettalic Remainz For CONFETTI
Like Jason,But Its a Mic Im Holdin To KILL You Niggaz, Not An Oversized Machetti

No..you attempted vocaublar here but it didnt work out. Your concepts were too simple in this bar and you werent complex enough.

Have Ya Tongue-Kissin My "Nine",But Im Not Talkin About My "Erection"
Have Ya Cross-sided After This Battle,Cuz ima Have Ya "lookin" In 2 Different Directionz

Wasnt feeling this either. The wording was off and again, this was too basic.

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Neither really came all that great but Barz took this easily overall because Ghost was just too basic and didnt come complex at all.

Vote- Barz Of Steel

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