Maverick:

Stanza...I'll 'Defocate On your Brain' To Give You Some 'Shit To Think~About'...
Only Way You Get Twisted Is When Your Clothes Are Ringing~Out...
Not A Hard Hitting Punch..3/10
Your Rhymes Aint Heavy Weight Dawg I'll Legally Box~Ya...
I'm Burning Your Ass So Hard They Labelled me the Hot~Stuff...
Weak..2/10
Watch~out This Is A 'Hot~Bout'...But Your Fire's Gettin 'Stomped~Out'...
I'm Rising Coz I'm Smoking But You Hoping You Dont Get Knocked Out...
Weak..No Punch..2/10
Your Vocab Wouldn't Be Ill If I Soaked Your Brain~In~Puke...
You Firing Blanks Dawg And I'm Aiming~Nukes...
Blah..3/10
You Need To Get Training~Troops...If You Wanna Beat~Me...
Or Your Gonna Have To Hire An Assassin To Do It Discreetly...
Weak..3/10

Overall: 13/50...Please Elevate and Actually Write Punches.

Stanza:

This Dude Is Bad Huh...Not A Win On his Record .........not Even In Graphics
Sufficate Yo Lyrics Like Plastic its Real Drastic Then Dump Yo Body Like Ashes
Um..4/10
See when Spit Ima make you fade Away like the Pic Of Tupac & Big In Ya Sig
If Wackness Came In Slides Then We All know Youd Have the Most Skids
Haha Ok..6/10
Dude Lets face Reality You Really dont Have any Rap or Hip Hop Talents
They Call You Tipsy Bcuz when I Spit I Leave "ROB" "R"eally "O"ff "B"alance
Ok..5/10
Its comin Down To an End So I guess I Can ease of The gas Pedal Of Skills
If Dopeness Was a Car Then Your Escort Wouldnt make Evenit up The Hill
Weak..3/10
Your Not In Area So Ima Bout To Bury Ya Like Gurls dat Wont Marry Ya
Ima Tarry Up and Then Tear it Up Like You was tryin To Stear It up
Wack..2/10

Overall: 20/50..Elevate On Punches and Creativity.

~R~