id say this was a great drop

great use of vocab, portrayed a vivid story, and effective multies which gave it nice flow and a good read; and the vocab you used really brought out the story, good choice of descriptive words, which really painted a vile picture of this creature, nah sayin? and the emotion was pretty good too....if i may say so....haha....overall, great drop, yeah, some lines did seem a little fillerish, but oh well, still fit the context and worked out to be a good one

rtf on the one in my sig , keep up

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