Voted For: E.C

Blah, ok battle.

Daubs: Aight, I can see you were trying to be creative, but your punches just didn't hit hard. I'm still trying to figure out how you made that granny punch. I liked your creativity though, nice to see different concepts. However, I think your punches just weren't that good, just creative. Only a few personals, which hurt you, no real wordplay, basically too simple of a verse. Work on making more effective punches and including more personals.

E.C: Personals helped you win this battle. Some of your first lines in your bars felt like fillers though, so you need to watch that. Make them relevant and not just there so things rhyme. Personals hit somewhat, but nothing that ground shaking. I laughed at the ... one cuz of his verse. Overall, I think you need to work on including more wordplay. I liked your personals, but I didn't like the few fillers I found.

v- E.C

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