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Old 06-14-05, 10:48 AM   #20
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Ok...

KhAoz, I was feeling your verse, but you did not come as hard as he did. Your punches, personals, wordplay, and metaphors were all there, but IMO he just out-did you. You were not very consistent, and you came with a few played lines, which lost you some points. I KNOW that you can do better man, but you have just either been slacking off lately or underestimating your opponents, and that is something that you should never do.

Indephz, real nice verse from you man. Haven't really seen much from you before, but you have talent. You came consistent with one creative punch after another, and they all connected. Had some good/funny wordplay in your verse as well (i.e. your closer, LMAO). Personals were there and they were hitting where it hurts. Overall, a good verse from you.

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