Voted For: Paranoid


Both yall was kinda eh with your drops

Fyre....you had a good storyline but ya whole style of writing is so basic....no metaphors...imagery was fair not great somewhat forced in spots....vocab was real basic, however flow & structure was good...basically u had a good drop that lacked complexity....that same drop with upped vocab an some nice metas would own alot of people.

Para....u was almost identical in ya astyle of drop jus I found ya story a lil more enjoyable, ya flow & structure was on point coulda used some multies....imagery was decent jus a tad better than fyre....reall if she had alil more complexity she woulda smashed you....u had a good drop but fyre beat herself in this one

Vote: Para

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