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Old 06-14-05, 02:27 PM   #8
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Easy win for Marv, should be a KO

Marv came with the punches, dope wordplay, and nice personals. CRI$$TYLE, You have potential, but your verse lacked punches, personals, wordplay, and skill. Try being more creative and not just rambling bullshit. Make your punches actually hit him. You had a whole bunch of played lines in your verse, so just try being more creative and consistent.

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