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Old 06-14-05, 02:41 PM   #27
Murdah.txt
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Voted For: Limited Edition

ohhh limited this was dope good structure good strong feelin in this also good flow very simple to read good ryme scheam also i like how u added tha to my family then to yo friendz and how u started it by sayin a few barz then closed it tha same way dopeness this was one of tha best topicals ive read so this is your easyily exelent job on this man madd propz

topical-u also had good structure and flow feelin was less deep though and vocab wasnt as strong as his good verse thou for sho like yo concept on this too he just had a way betta structure and set up but dont fault this piece cause it was good i liked errythi9ng bout it just didnt have tha feelin that his did and also i liked his set uop better so imma say limited takes this dope dropz both yall keep it up
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