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Old 06-14-05, 11:01 PM   #6
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From: Adanac
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hmm, this was a really basic diss, there wasn't anything really creative that stood out, everything was too simple, no hate, it seemed like Jdot keyed his up real quick...so basically, i say up creativity/complexity, and get some wordplay...it was lacking, but overall, it was an average diss, owned anything that this trini dude has done

oh, and ghost, you dont have to use " " around every punch, you only want to resort to those if you have really tricky wordplay or sump, just lengthens your lines and makes it look really gay

best line, was bq's opener, but it was forced with multies, it was kinda funny though, the punch, word

pz,
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