Voted For: SCI CON

SCI CON:

your soppused~to~be as Dope~as~me`bitch jut keep focused~G
This whole bar is a multie` bitch Go~die` since youre opposing~me
^^^Tight multi's 9/10
arch~angel` I’ll leave your heart~strangled` so lets compare~levels
Your probably an alias` known as the gayest~kid call me a Dare~devel
^^^^Good punchlines 8/10
someone told~me` you aint fresh..just Moldy` like un-used~dairy
this newbs~scary reminds me of an overweight MM, like Drew~Cary
^^^^tight multi usin, lost the flow a bit, wack closing 5/10

.........Tight struture, flow lost at the end, good punchlines and multi's, but no personals.

Archangel:

this nigga says hes large.... allover tha street when he rolls,
yeah fat as hell..... got guys stickin 2 ur ass like cholesterol,
^^^^ Nice punchline... funny shit 7/10
im tha king of cheap shots leavin ya body full of holes,
fucka cheap shot son im sellin bullets from coles,
^^^^wack man.... 2/10
ur lost in tha clouds but dawg ive come 2 kill a dream,
im freddy crueger bitch open up ur mind like a gillotine,
^^^^wack but funny, 4/10
lets say 4 evry bad line weve eva had they took a dollar and went to burn it,
then im livin it up son and ur a fuckin river hermit,
^^^^No Struture, then no flow, but a creative punchline 5/10

....Man u got bad structure, so as the flow, but u got creative in this ma fucka, u need ta improve your multis' cuz SCI CON got u with that.

Both: try to get into sum hard hittin personals....

V/ SCI SON

RTF for more honest votes.... pz

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