Ahhhhh I like this piece...It was the out-view. I liked your imaginary, the visual words between your lines was good. The weakest aspect from your verse was the emotion. The best aspect from your verse was The Imaginary, i say you upp your emotion and put some decent meta'z..But overall= Decent...1


Return a favor by leaving a feedback in my newest OM "Stranded in the middle of the ocean"...Chea

__________________
mystery Is a Freak!!

ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*