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I expected a little bit better battle, but still good.

Daz:
dont men-chin triggers or ya home to say what ya drag-on about(queen)
cuz afterall RV's community's usta smokin J's n putting 'em out..!
Decent punch. The personal was ok, but could have been stronger
you fuckin roach, i mean cock.. like when your deep throaten'em
how do ya sir-cum to vets... even when their off hand-in 'em.....!
Ehh, a cock and cum line? Come on Daz.
dopeness to you is a snap shot, damn then you a clip-per bum?
cuz i trade W's for J's, nowonder marv's-way is past random(ran dum)
Lol, nice wordplay and personal.
i bet you'd rob a bitch n her drinks place just to be a boaster
but ya elevations to short, even in lines for roll-her-coasters..!
Decent punch
better start tossing ya shit drops so ya ass can be futhered
i mean this battles an ironic trial..
............cuz this time Oh'J's, the one that got fuckin murdered
Lol, nice wordplay on this closer.

Overall, I liked some of your wordplay, but some of it wasn't that great. One bar I didn't like at all (cock and cum), but you made up for it with your personals and punches. I think, not really sure if you meant to, but you made fun of Marv's style with the ...? If not, it seems like you did so I liked that. Not a bad verse, but not the best I've seen.

vs.

MarvJay:
y am i battlin dis kid again dis fucker's trash,ya verses=clutter,trash.
dis nigga use 2 be quiet but i can see sombody really "KURUPT(ed)..DaZ".
Ehh, personal was kind of weak here. Wording could have been better
so i gota check dis hore.6-10 lines? nah ya wack ass need a extra four.
but da only time you'll ever "sell a cd"...........u "workin in a record store".
Booo at the filler, ending punch was ok. I've seen that concept a lot though.
i'll slaughter him,rite now he sittin down with paper & some saught of pen.
rv rides dis fag just "abreviate DOCTOR" u'll see how get'z all his wins. *DR.*
I'm starting to see the forced wordplay. Ending punch was bad.
so stupid come fuck with me,i aim good i hope ya ass can duck quickly.
or ima leave ya face like "half of g-unit".....u gone have a "BUCK/FiFTy".*
You talk about shooting, then end with a razor? Wtf? Work on your wording
im sick daz u couldn't compare....& fam how are you da crook of da year.
u got no criminal record...only "jail"*gel* u know is da shit u "put in ya hair".
Ok wordplay. Not amazing though cuz jail and gel don't sound a lot alike

Overall, I can see where people were talking about forced wordplay. Some of your wordplay was ok, but a lot of it was forced or just plain bad. I liked one or two of your punches, but other than that. Also, work on your concepts. Like I said you went from a gun to a razor. So your concept did a 180.

I am going to have to go with Daz in this battle. His punches and personals were harder, and also his wordplay was a little wittier than Marv's.

v-Daz
(No hate just an honest opinion)

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