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y am i battlin dis kid again dis fucker's trash,ya verses=clutter,trash.
dis nigga use 2 be quiet but i can see sombody really "KURUPT(ed)..DaZ".
6...decent opener, a nice concept to use for a personal and you pulled it off.
so i gota check dis hore.6-10 lines? nah ya wack ass need a extra four.
but da only time you'll ever "sell a cd"...........u "workin in a record store".
4...weak man, the setup was irrelevant and the whole sell a cd concept is played, ain't you used it before to??
i'll slaughter him,rite now he sittin down with paper & some saught of pen.
rv rides dis fag just "abreviate DOCTOR" u'll see how get'z all his wins. *DR.*
5...weak again, the setup was too basic and irrelevant and the whole doctor concept was not that original really.
so stupid come fuck with me,i aim good i hope ya ass can duck quickly.
or ima leave ya face like "half of g-unit".....u gone have a "BUCK/FiFTy".*
6...clever 2nd line, i was feelin the concept even though g-unit shit is getting played out.
im sick daz u couldn't compare....& fam how are you da crook of da year.
u got no criminal record...only "jail"*gel* u know is da shit u "put in ya hair".
6...decent wordplay, quite original concept, overall good punch.

OVERALL: 27/50


dont men-chin triggers or ya home to say what ya drag-on about(queen)
cuz afterall RV's community's usta smokin J's n putting 'em out..!
5...not feelin this opener, both concepts have been used before, especially the smokin J's concept on marv, that shit is just gay now!!
you fuckin roach, i mean cock.. like when your deep throaten'em
how do ya sir-cum to vets... even when their off hand-in 'em.....!
7...LMAO!!!! a decent concept, getting played i guess but this was funny as hell.
dopeness to you is a snap shot, damn then you a clip-per bum?
cuz i trade W's for J's, nowonder marv's-way is past random(ran dum)
7...DAMN!!! nice play off his name, good personal punch.
i bet you'd rob a bitch n her drinks place just to be a boaster
but ya elevations to short, even in lines for roll-her-coasters..!
6...decent wordplay, kinda fell off compared to the previous two bars though.
better start tossing ya shit drops so ya ass can be futhered
i mean this battles an ironic trial..
............cuz this time Oh'J's, the one that got fuckin murdered
6...decent closer, the OJ shit has been done before, you put a decent twist on it, but still it is kinda played.

OVERALL: 31/50


decent battle.....
marv had a few nice lines, couple of weaker ones and one real gay ass one, stop recyclin concepts...try and use some original material
likewise to daz, he also used some played concepts, had some killer lines in there, overall i think he was more consistent though.....so he wins in my book.....

V/ - Daz

RTF!!! wicked one battle in my sig!!!!!

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