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leave you rest'n pz's
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Voted For: King Solo
Rollin with Livin’ Legendz proves that they show pity on a wack G..
Cuz I went and said “wicked is dope” and even M-Eazy slapped me..
^^lol, ok, but not hard hittin
Kids feelin bad about himself…but hey, I can have ya spirits lifted..
Ya was born on Christmas eve…so at least ya was close to being gifted..
^^why..?christmas=gifted=cali fat jokes played
Ya battles bring flocks of Indians…well at least they have up till now..
Cuz ‘wicked gets them wins’ and the onlookers are just like “HOW??”..
^^aight
Wicked don’t try, his skinny ass wud evaporate if he broke a sweat..
Livin out there where its real…so he spends all his time on the net..
^^elaberate....set up n punch was weak...
I think there’s been a mix-up…names have been switched around..
Cuz I believe its clear to everyone that its me who’s battling the clown..
^^personal..?...not sure, benifit of the doubt
This kid gets merked…he don’t respond wit words but ‘gun crimes’..
Cuz this dude ‘claps back’…………………………………… ………
……………………………….when he applauds his opponents rhymes..
^^flipped concept but ya it was decent
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alot of flipped concepts n ya punches delivery need some work, but overall you were consistent enough with punches that it was on average about a constant 6.5/10 verse..
wouldve been good to see some nice wordplay ect..
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Your mouth is runnin like athelete's foot and still peelin...
Tried to "kick" his best delivery but Solo had no real feelin...
^^nah, this was wack
Feel my bold demeanor I'm typin this laid back while I blow reefer...
Solo couldn't blaze a track wearin Marion Jones sneakers...
^^decent, but needed work
Fuck your crummy ass punches they're fake and deemed shitty...
You the type a nigga that'll fetch a cheesecake for P Diddy...
^^nah, wackness at its best
In fact you prolly already did cornball mascot for Making the Band...
Doing the booty shake for a grand getting ass raped where you stand...
^^wack, no punch...wtf..?
I'm degrading you man in real life I'd chase you off the mic...
Your rhymes are trash dude all you do is waste them on this site...
^^weak, very weak..
U got 39 KO's?(HA!) my words are powerful like when a Reverend's preachin...
Where's my hand job Solo? I'm the only one you've never beaten...
^^lol,,, that was so fuckin gay but decent play on words.
but it made you out to be sooooo gay....lol...rofl
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you need to work on your format n delivery the most, stay away from weak ass blah punches n dont use wordplay to make yourself look gay like you did in your closer, plus that shit was played, ive just never seen such a bad use of wordplay in a verse b4.....good try......
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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