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Old 06-15-05, 06:12 PM   #10
K-Trini
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if affliction cant out "weigh bread" how tha fucks he liftin toast?
left poetic scriptures cuz ya "untitled" thread fucked up da post
^^good
please you ain hardcore, RapVerse got a real bitch on its hands
threaten to pull tha semi?....plz homie, kid ya dick in ya pants!!!!
^^ahh...kinda weak
fear instilled in you, who really wants a loser in the best crew?
ur house has no numbers, y?...no one wants to ADDRESS you!!!
^^Nice
you aint on my level afflict, i'm on a cliff literally starin over yall
flictions a gangsta!, he [i]stay strapped[i]..on his farm wearin overalls
^^weak
in front lines u lack skills, dont dq votes...everyone'll vote fairly
strobe add 0-2 to his record......since gettin KO'D is his "theory"
^^Ok

This was a good verse but some punches were weak.I like the fact ya had a lot a personals in it.


Damn, without Hotness and flow you still haven't elevated*
Your punches are weak and small, like your name stated*
^^weak
Your punches are "haze" like juelz santana in your sig*
Have you so scared that you won't flick me back ya dig?*
^^nah..weak
Ya from the New York city the uptown? Your skillz are negative
And I'll make you so close to your str by
................................taking the 1..Damn I'm so creative*
^^weak
By the time this battle is over so is your sickness man*
I'm the damn tylenol, i'm so above of you right now
^^nah
.............you can catch me on the top shelf in publix fam
You can get locked up by still won have "steel bars"
Played
Your punches are so out-dated like the played start wars
^^finish tha bar?

Ur verse was weak.U gotta work on ur punches.Speccially on ripping someone's name

Vote-SickSeed(return the favor in the link)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851
^^^vote in my battle
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