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Old 06-15-05, 06:25 PM   #8
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Good poem OMB, don't think i ever read anything like this from you, or if you ever dropped a poem in here before, i liked the emotion in this and the emphasis on the flame/fire concept, although it is a deep piece to us as readers, to you it is somewhat of unleashing a truth in your feelings, but well done and your style is similiar to early Edgar Allen Poe works with the way it is written and how it flowed. nice job.1
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