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Old 06-16-05, 12:08 PM   #4
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Voted For: King Solo

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Return the vote ^^^


Rollin with Livin’ Legendz proves that they show pity on a wack G..
Cuz I went and said “wicked is dope” and even M-Eazy slapped me..
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Openin line was mad forced, second line was a good punch.

Kids feelin bad about himself…but hey, I can have ya spirits lifted..
Ya was born on Christmas eve…so at least ya was close to being gifted..
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Really nice punch an personal

Ya battles bring flocks of Indians…well at least they have up till now..
Cuz ‘wicked gets them wins’ and the onlookers are just like “HOW??”..
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your weakest bar...

Wicked don’t try, his skinny ass wud evaporate if he broke a sweat..
Livin out there where its real…so he spends all his time on the net..
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pretty decent, nothin' like your first two bars tho'

I think there’s been a mix-up…names have been switched around..
Cuz I believe its clear to everyone that its me who’s battling the clown..
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not, bad not bad, i ain't mad at that line, made me laugh...

This kid gets merked…he don’t respond wit words but ‘gun crimes’..
Cuz this dude ‘claps back’…………………………………… ………
……………………………….when he applauds his opponents rhymes..
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i was gonna say PLAYED, But for real....that punch in the second line was nice as fuck..

Dope verse, you killed it, few bars were weak, but for the most part, flow an punches hit they mark...good verse, you wrapped it up man


Your mouth is runnin like athelete's foot and still peelin...
Tried to "kick" his best delivery but Solo had no real feelin...
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good concept, but the punch in the second line could of been harder hittin'..

Feel my bold demeanor I'm typin this laid back while I blow reefer...
Solo couldn't blaze a track wearin Marion Jones sneakers...
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naw, this was your weakest bar


Fuck your crummy ass punches they're fake and deemed shitty...
You the type a nigga that'll fetch a cheesecake for P Diddy...
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it was straight, nothin' too dope tho'

In fact you prolly already did cornball mascot for Making the Band...
Doing the booty shake for a grand getting ass raped where you stand...
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it was aight...

I'm degrading you man in real life I'd chase you off the mic...
Your rhymes are trash dude all you do is waste them on this site...
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easily your best bar, you had a chilled out flow too the punch, an it mocked him, nice bar...

U got 39 KO's?(HA!) my words are powerful like when a Reverend's preachin...
Where's my hand job Solo? I'm the only one you've never beaten...
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lol, nice

In-consistant verse, you had like 6 lines in your verse that i wasnt feelin' at all....last 2 bars were nice as fuck, if you had more of the last 2 bars in your verse, you would of got the win....punches lacked creativity in places, an your wordplay was kinda basic, but decent drop, just be more consistant an set your whole verse out like your last 2 bars........

Vote-King solo

RTF.
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