Voted For: Tephlon

Mistah A Got u to battle?
.........................,,,,,,.your runnin a pussy ass crew
just ask Mizz Fyre.........even she's ashamed of you!!!!
6...decent personal punch here, the setup was relevant but cud be better worded for harder affect as well as the punch itself.
i rest my case in 2 lines, so i'll just waste these next four
cause the only ''hot text'' u ever have is cyberin your whore!
5...decent concept for a personal, but i think you worded it a little basic.
callin yourself a respectable head?...
......................................please tell me that aint a fact??
i got approched by this whack, because opposites attract!
6...ok bar, good way to finish off the verse.

OVERALL: 17/30


i could sit u n a room labeled 1 and give u a hall pass
u can leave n comeback and still wouldnt be in the first class(1)
5...not feelin this really, too basic for me and the way you used the first class shit was weak.
ima cause lyrical supression to this manz RV obsession(2)
give em a radar,he still aint detectin this subliminal message
0...no hate with this but.....obsession and message dont rhyme at the end, maybe with different accents they might but to me they do not.
This kid is seriously wack for his amount of RV experience
he bitches more than girls on they monthly menstrals...period..(3)
5...worded basic, but still prolly your best bar.

OVERALL: 10/30

tephlon was consistent
had decent punches, the one i wasn't feelin as much, wordplay was basic, but the personal punches were there

judicial came weak....
two average bars.
one that didnt rhyme to me. basic all the way through, need to get more complex with ya punches.

V/ - Tephlon

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