leave you rest'n pz's
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IP:
Voted For: Anamosity
The Revelation 'Change His Name' So Much He Lost Is 'Identification'
His Punches Don't Exist Like Paraplegics Jumping & That's Revelation
^^wasnt feelin this opener, punch didnt connect
I'll Leave This Kid Laying Around..........Like His Sig, Call Him A Circle
60 Seconds Of Fame Is Up.... Left It Short Term Like A Infomercial
^^nah, this was weak
Like Ciara's Sex Change, The Doc's Will End Up Patching-His-Frame
Golden Dayz Is At An End Man, His Condition Is Matching-His-Name
^^decent
Ya Not Hott Like Matches.........Even Though Your Hair Color Match It*
This Faggot Couldn't Drop A Tight Verse If You Came With A Ratchet
^^simple, setup was good but punch lacked
Release A Gas Bubble & Light A Match And You Still Can't Spit Flames
You Garbage Kid, In All Your Text Battles All I Saw Was You Rip Lames
^^??...punch was worded wrong...hurt the bar
Can't Battle A Real Vet, Kid I've Got More Referrals Then You Got Wins
I Hear You Like Soccer........Cuzz You Got Balls To Your Head And Shins
^^decent, worded a little off but its ok
Your Text And Sig Making Skill Is Relevant Kid......Cuzz The Both Suck
You Should Stop Now For I See Your Work Get Taken By Trash Trucks
^^simple again
I Hear You Got Chick Problems & That's Just On Your Net Connection
You Got 4000 Post Bin Here Since July......And Still Ned Vet Protection
^^nah, thats weak, vet protection..?..lol
Bitch Learn How To Spell.....Exponent Always Catch An 'L', It's To 'Easy' *
His Girl Said It's Over, So He Got On His Knees Begging Don't Leave Me
^^nope,...wack
This Prick Juggle Balls Like 'Tha Q' If You Notice His Name Say's & Reps
So He Joined Sigfried And Roy In Las Vegas........And Filmed Up Gay Sex*
^^wasnt feelin it
This Kid's RapVerse Career Aint Going No Where..........Just Face-It-Fairy*
Your Flow Is Like An Parked Car Running...............It Remains Stationary
^^decent punch
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overall you had 2 slightly decent bars, you gotta work on your
delivery n creativity.concepts were for the most part simple
n had very little personal/punches that were effective..
wording fell off in a few areas but verse was consistent
other then that...you need wordplay n better personals...
Self esteem suffered, sorry Isaiah but even the Bible leaves ya in doubt,
Only reason he is an original RB member, is because he wanted my account!
^^decent, but stretched,, ok punch thou
He took every account I had to try and hide his true ID,
Getting taught topicals and living with his mom till he’s over 18!
^^ok, ryhme scheme was fucked here, dont matter how you say it, it just doesnt work, sorry, punch was personal but not creative.
Battling everyone on RV, yet your record is 1-0, guess you almost had it,
Left ya broken and pathetic just like how ya girl did.
^^ nah wasnt feelin this, punch was wack..
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overall, shorten ya bars, stay away from dissing your girl through a girlfreind or weak personals such as the 18 thingy
thats not a diss fam, its a lame statement that has no real
bearing in a text battle..get some wordplay in your verses.
work on your concepts n connecting your punches bettter.
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overall i gotta go with wall street for the simple fact alot of his verse was better written n had better delivery..
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no hate fam....
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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