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Old 06-16-05, 02:20 PM   #13
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Voted For: Mimesis

My Blurted-Spits, Immerse-ya-Bitch, In an Earth-Filled-Ditch while I Traverse-the-Pit
Adversely-Sick, I Coerce-this-Kid, To Disperse-his-Wig when his Nerves-go-Twitch
^^lots of meaningless multi's
Ya Personals Arent ‘Makin-Contact’ Like Retired ‘Baseball Vets’, You Aint-Hittin
Mayne-Listen…ill Snatch Ya ‘Necklace’, Brain-Twitchin Now Cuz Ya Chain-Missin!!! *
^^nope, flow fell off in setup too
Mimesis ? My Storm Swarms ya World, Beat you over the Head with Broken-Boards
Snatch ya Spits Straight From-ya-Throat and Choke ya with your Own-Vocal-Chords
^^blah, wheres the punch?
I'm Depleting ya Frame,Don't mean problems with Stationary when I say my Ink-will-Run
And the Battle's like Shady and Christian Women, Ya chance of Winning is Slim-to-Nun
^^flow fell way off in setup, punch is generic n lame
this bitch ain't Gangsta, Question if i Carry-Tools, Not aware that I Bury-Fools
Mimesis Beating murdz? No Way 'You are not A-Loud' Just like 'Following Library-Rules"
^^ok, but whats with all the filler
face it Mimesis You Nervous-Kid Jus A Worthless-Bitch Tryna To Get Into Sum Circuit-Shit
Spittin That Hurtful-Shit And Notice you Couldn’t Have A ‘Hot Hand’ Witta Thermal-Grip!!!
^^eh, wouldve been good used against a different opponent
like hotshh... but it had no releventcy in this battle n was weak....
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overall you need to work on not putting tonnes of filler in your bars, make your personals connect, actually just get some in your verse first...... so many bars were wack with
meaningless multi's, your better off not to right with them if you can't use them right...
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Nobodys reading your shit.. Still plan to win with ur spit hittin the deck?
Even though,
He already told me I was going to be leaving.. with a win on my rec
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^^decent, good opener, straight to the point
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Why admit that I'll win??... at least you know your gettin ripped in two
Cause we're not agitated farmers.. but nobody wants to listen to Mu
^^lol, good nameplay....connected
You have no skill son.. custom title admitting that your run down
Faggots only a Draft Pick because I'm dropping Murdz in one round
^^decent
Having fun now?.. I'm never passed as wack.. They're givin you a rally
Cause it speaks for itself when everybody thought you were Lil Cali
^^good personal, simple but good
I thought I had a challenge.. but Murdz is just another dropped queer
Cause you threw a story in Peer Counselor..
..I'll just throw you off the peer
^^lol,...decent
Nobody fears you.. Normally I tip my hat, but shit, you cant rap kid
I'll just give you mine so you can finally see what's like to cap wins
^^closer was iffy to me....
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overall i was feeling your personals n i could tell you didnt bother putting filler into your verse like murdz did , best line was the mu-line, shit was creative n had me crackin up..
both dropped decent but murdz had no personals n just generic blahness...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!