leave you rest'n pz's
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Voted For: hotshh!
still New, but you? over 2 thousand posts, still aint ''On top''
Twice u finished 3rd, i mean c'mon, who needs 2 Shots?
^^weak opener, punch lacked
ur suppose 2 be ''Hot''..........plz say not one ov da best?
took u 2 years, No more, No Less...
..& look at ur achievements, r we suppose 2 be impressed?
^^not feeling it
we show little 2 no Intrest In-ur-self....its obvious ur Obsessed
''Droppin knowledge''?..lol ''Titty-Feedin'' iz da only tyme ur ''Abreast''*
^^decent punch
You's a MESS, Literally, they gon be scrapin yuh ''Peeled-Cap'' off da Block
Veteran? last tyme ''east met west'' we all kno da ''Big-Man'' Got SHOT
^^nope, wack bar n punch
u cant stop da inevitable, its..lyke college girls, juz ''give it up''
medicine manz syck?..closest he ever got wuz complainin ov a ''Hiccup''
^^nope, didnt connect,setup n punch had no relevetcy together
Lyrikal stick-up, remove hands frum da ''keys'' lyke u dropped ''cocaine''
=End Ov Establishments Reign=
...Theyre addicted 2 my ''Dope''...call hotshh da ''Bird-brain''
^^eh, stretched n needed rewording to be effective
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overall your verse was very choppy n you lacked in decent concepts that were hard hitting, 1 nice bar, you need wordplay that isnt forced in your verse, improve on that, n dont stretch your lines. first 2 bars were pure filler in my opinion.....other then that..average drop
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U got merked twice by Misk, another loss u wouldnt Risk It
Figured cant beat em join em, Then U jumped on his Clicks Dick
^^not really feelin this bar/personal
U Misfit, I switch gears like a Stick Shift, to Kill you Faster
Since when do "Living Legends" make kids " Die with Laughter"?
^^decent punch, funy aspect...
Weak Bastard.....shit, You cant achieve " a Level of Excellence"
So I'll heat you up faster than peppers eaten by Mexicans
^nope, not feelin this hotshh
U couldnt be a "G" with Gotti's Heart, kid drunk on Bacardi Dark
Who thought " Saving Hip Hop" was fixing Dislocated Body Parts!
^^nice, i liked this bar for some reason..
Im breaking your arms, Blocking ya punches, Running Your Bars
You couldnt 'Rep the Hood' If U shouted out the Front of Ya Car
^^ok, decent
I told crews to keep these newbs away........They No Hear Me
Dont hafta drop the 'Z' from ya name, to see Hot Khao Theory
^^best bar n punch/nameplay in the battle, dope
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overall consistent verse, a couple bars i wasnt feeling but you brought alot more above average punches then khaoz
n your closer was pure brilliance, nice drop, closer was the illest...nice drop...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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