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Old 06-16-05, 11:14 PM   #22
Indeph
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Voted For: Wicked One

aight this came down to the wire.
since what one lacked the other had.
So I had to choose which one was more in importance.

Stanza had personals.The opener's SETUP was
better then the punchline itself,which is not a good thing.
the flow was slightly strech althogh so was wicked ones.
structure was good but I don't pay attention to that as much.
plus the hotdog and buns line is hella played.but I guess
it gave you some points anyway.Overall u get a 4/10

Wicked one.

aight your punches were alot better.Seemed consecutive
with wordplay.Though you lacked in personals (didn't have none) but it kept it comin with disses wordplay and flow too
which lacks alot in text battles.So you did pretty good in my book.Just next time come with more personals.This verse could of been used against me and made sense.Just change the name.I give u a 7/10

vote/wicked one.

peace