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Old 06-17-05, 05:47 AM   #2
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Beautiful love poem, every girl's heart would just melt if someone would write this for her. I feel you gently build up the emotion till the last line that ended the piece in a serene, pure way. Not so much imagery but the emotion just poured out, went into detail about how much she means to you and such. Enjoyed reading this, keep it up!
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