Voted For: artÃ-stica~Mente

Drakel[b]: beautiful and touching piece right here, may not have been the most original one but the emotion simply poured out. You kept the vocab rather simple but that gave it a serene vibe. Imagery was there but not that much, it's more an emotional piece. I was feeling the flow, had some multis and similar sound expressions which improved it.

[b]Tweety: wonderful piece in my opinion, the emotion was so strong and pure, it poured out of every line. Like how your story developed, especially the last part was good storywise. You managed to combine both imagery and emotion, flow was off here and there but overall it was okay. Vocab was nice

Vote goes to Tweety because of the stronger combination of imagery and emotion, no hate though Drakel

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