Some good shit.... I'll keep the nice things short
Beat, lyrics, voice, I liked these all
I can tell ya mic is poor, which makes ya quality bad
Emotion was OK, but when ya talked sounded like you were either calm or were sad
I dont do a lotta these tracks, spoken word I mean..
But my advice is dont start ya verses and speak with the same tone permanently
Try to change it up on an occasional basis,
But i dunno, maybe ya mic aint able to pick up subtle voice changes.
Other than that, and ya quality, nothing was wack
And it wouldnt be a bad thing if you were to flood us with tracks.

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