it was nice homie, i really like your multis.....if you were thinking about recording it then you need to change the structure a little for the bars...somethin like this

Deaths a scary thang, but i still try to stay strong-son/
With so many religonz out there i git worried, wut if i pick tha wrong-one?/

instead of like.....

Deaths a scary thang, but i still try to stay strong-son, with so many religonz out there i git worried, wut if i pick tha wrong-one?/

please rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194203