Voted For: Funn D. Mentals

Aii This is What I thinks

TekNeek
Your bars don't connect son, Elite? You'd never belong in the section
Shit, I ain't seen a worse form on Rv... since your fuckin' reflection
...Nuttin Specail..
So ya think you're gonna fuck wid ma tekneek? Please, I'm a veteran, fool
'Cuz peeps only gotta check ma stats... to see I'm 3x better than u
...Good Bar ...But Watch out for the self- Glorification...
tek stays smackin' these newbies, kids just ain't comin' with talent
The type to rap like Mike in Still Tippin, claims he only lacks balance
...LOL I didnt get it at first LOL Nice Mayne
And kid stays on my dick! Reasearches my battles w/ hopes to win
He believe he could fly... 'til his window of opportunity locked him in
...no Punch jus a diss...<
So give up, you had ur chance at glory, don't let it go to your head
Or my punches'll raise ya off the floor.. I'm baking this Wonderbread
....Ok......

Overall i think That You Should try to Work more on Hitting at your oppenent instead of boosting yourself up bcuz youll lose votes that way so ......work on that

Funn D. Mentals
Dude, I'm Bout To "Bring Disaster", When I Attack Your Ligaments, And Your Spleen In Plastered..!!,
You'll Scream I'm Master..!! When I "Burn Your Disk" Like My Surreal Hits Is Teamed With Napster!!!..
....Ok....
Win? Just Dream You Bastard..!! Nay Bitch Go..!(Nabisco) Cause I Just Cream The Cracker..!!
Give You A Clean Fracture..!!, Then "Freeze Your Ghost' Like Your "Soul's Scene" Was Captured..!!
...LOL That was Good qordplay...
Want Heat? I’ll "Burn Your Family Tree" Until The Whole Regime's Seen The Rapture..!!
And ‘Smoke Your Cells’ Until I “Bust This Nut’ And It’s Hard To Keep Gene’s Wrapped Up..!!
/.....Nuttin specail..
I’m Erasing You Fool, You Could Dive In Boards! And I’ll Still Put Your Face In A Pool,
Let You “Cool Off” Cause I’m Known To ‘Bring Out Tec’s” Like Athletes Breaking The Rules..!!
....Good wordplay..
My Palms Will Hurt This Tyrant, And If This Con Show’s No Improvement..!! He’ll Have To Prove Sick..!!
Cause I’m Eligible To ‘Dispose Of Tec’s (Teks)’ Like Non Violent Movements
LOL Good...

Aii Overall I Think That YUo take this battle bcuz you hade some very good wordplay but you dont have any direct punchez toward your oppenent then your gonna lose your next battle ...and work on fixing your structure bcuz the shit is sloppy man make it look like tekneeks and itll be easier to read ........And youll win yo next battle if you take this advice

RTF In Any battle link in my sig or You Will stay on my list of peeps who dont Return The Favour