this was good, interesting, quick paced read....im feeling this would make a sweet song, if you found a solid beat, nah mean?

i liked the first verse, how you broke everything down and really contrasted reality with fantasy...it worked nice, and how you incorporated it with hip hop, word

second verse, it was good, the mirror line was fire....yeah, so overall, i was feelin' this for sure, keep up yo

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