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Old 06-17-05, 06:54 PM   #22
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Voted For: pictureperfect2

ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs
we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does
^^ok, but i wasnt feeling the person, didnt connect
U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it
its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect"
^^seen this in cyphers/tc/wack.....
but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness,
but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness
^^weak, stretched bad ..
God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in
we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins
^^decent, didnt connect well thou
girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post
cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes?
^^decent, but it didnt connect well.
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overall your verse was consistent but lacked proper wording
n hard hitting punches towards your opponent, a played concept was the purfect line/pussy..blah, it wasnt great anyhow...closer was ok, nothin special in this verse to be honest homie...
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oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag
turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag'
^^decent, feeling the concept
avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge
cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up
^^ok, not feelin it much thou
u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent
cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it
^^forced ryhme scheme...ok, punch
so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'?
cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job?
^^lol,...this had releventcy to me considering ive seen that line"purfect"b4
im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass
cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past
^^ok, but setup n punch were irrelevant to each other
keep the concept similar for your punches......
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overall i was feeling a couple bars more then robkillas
this battle can honestly go either way cuz you both came
equally as good/bad....some stuff was plain boarderline wack
but some was a good personal...both need wordplay n better nameplays..
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!