Voted For: R-Rated

This Aint A Metaphor When I Say Let Me Paint A Perfect Picture of You..
Take Some Newb, Brush Some Played, and Add Some Wack To The Mixture Too..
^Nice play off his name... second line was funny aswell
PicturePefect Who?! Kid Your Status On This Site Is Completly Irrelevant..
Your Shit Is More Recycled Than Green Paper Covered With Dead Presidents..
^Not as good as your first bar but was good, nice punch in the second line
I Could Number My Lines and PicturePerfect Still Couldn't Count-R-Punches..
Daum The Note-R-Back Full of Hints..and He Still Couldn't Back-N-Hunches..
^Nice shit right there, first line was dopeness and well as the second line.. nice punch hoe
Watch Restricted Force-Flow This Fag..Like Homophobics Drowning Gay Kids..
Shit This Bitch Can't Even Begin To See My Keyed Verse...Like Rays Hits..
^Pretty decent too.. Not your best in this verse though
He's As Reliable As Cars With Gas Guages On E...He Quick To Stall Yo....
Cause His Ass Gets Lost In Lines Easliy...Like Books of Wheres Waldo??..
^haha, dope bar right there... second like = funny as shit

Overall you were very consistent with your punches and there wasn't really any fillers within your verse, each line shitted on him which is always good... And you had some funny lines in there too... nice verse



Ya crews a laughing stock like if u gave corn a tickle or shake
but like silicon breasts in ya face u don’t even care that they fake
^Started out well but then the second line fucked it up... breast implant lines = gay as fuck
this kids asshole is loose fitted like my jeans and what a crime
R’s talent continues to plunge more than a plumber working over time
^Meh... nice punch but setup was shitty... first line i felt was forced out and just a filler
it aint a greeting but your hands will be shaking when we meeting
16 bucks for a cd… your not worth 7 like other R-rated screenings
^Like your other bars.. the first line is good but the second is wack... well it wasn't wack but not as good as R-Rated
your punches make my stomache hurt after reading your spit
but dont get excited that happens whenever i laugh at stupid shit
^meh... kinda wack... I guess decent but could have been set up alot better and worded better
you say u got a ‘horizon of thoughts’ but this shit still isn’t fair
cuz your mind needs more than a metaphor for your skills to compare
^Meh... not much of a punch...

Overall your verse was decent but punches and consistency didn't compare with R-Rated... and yours was rather boring... nothing made me want to continue reading it... but alright verse..

vote- R-Rated

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