you needed direction in this verse.
it wasnt even a diss veerse, i mean seriously man
you need to up your creativity n try to bring some
concepts that arent generic... for the most part
you have some of the basics but ya verse was
way boring to read n you had no effective punches..
.no hate just being real with ya......pz
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n dont start beef with me over feedback
thats just retarded........done....

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!