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Old 06-18-05, 06:03 AM   #4
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Voted For: Murdz

Mimesis - ur opener was creative but kinda weak..ur next bar was nice..good personal..the lil cali line..didnt really hit hard..but it was still an ok personal..ur last 2 barz werent very good..ur closer was pretty weak..overall i think ur verse was decent..i had a good flow..it didnt seem like anything was forced..i expected u to come harder in ur verse.....6/10




Murdz - now ur verse was really strange..ur multis seemed forced..ur first line was dumb..well ur whole opener was weak..but after that u did well..i think i liked ur slim to nun bar the best..good stuff..the one thing ur verse lacked was personals..the only thing u had about him was when u said Mimesis beating murdz?..thats it..woulda liked to see more personals..ok closer..overall i think u need to stop using the multis cause they make ur lines streched.....8/10




Murdz wins