ok both of u had kinda the same content due that there was a woman involved and the creativity from both of u were nice and different good job to both of u but im gon have to go wit he most content and D had a longer verse and showed he put more thought ino his verse R was just too short but it was still good so both of u had their diff. aspect on the content and the structure was both evenly laid out but like i said i liked D verse better cuz first it was longer, so he had more vocab, and showed more creative talent in a longer verse so my
v// Dabatos

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