ok nice content on the both of u both had their own creative content on these and vocabulary was good to both of u and O damn long but worth reading and LS kinda short but still good as well again this shows who had more creativity and O showed more by having a longer piece but it was so long that it took the content of it way off and i didnt like that so in m opinion i think LS had the better piece cuz he stayed more on topic and stayed simple O was soooo long that it took tha topic a little off thats in my opinion but i still think that u both did good and i liked the both pieces but my
v// goes to LyricalSolja

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