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"Milestone" Chapter One
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06-18-05, 08:50 PM
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Daubs
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Nice man, structure was bad as a text verse, but i read it as if i were spittin it and it did flow so fucka structure.
2nd verse was better, but i was feelin the imagery and vocab throughout, overall nice peice.
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