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Old 06-19-05, 01:47 AM   #24
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Voted For: pictureperfect2

RobKilla

ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs
we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does
Pictures blowing up doesn't have anything to do with him. When you attempt a personal you have to make it relevant.. 4/10
U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it
its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect"
This is just a statement. Why did your set up, not set up your punch? Make the first line set up the punch, yours didn't set up shit. And, then your punch was just a statement. You attempted to make a personal, but it was worded horribly.. 3/10
but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness,
but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness
This was another statement, and another set up that had nothing to do with the punch. Saying there's no method to his madness doesn't connect at all. You are just saying shit. You need to re word your shit into punches and not just saying random stuff.. 3/10
God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in
we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins
This concept was decent, but it's like you forced it a little. In your set up you should have worded it a little differently, but the concept was still decent.. 6/10
girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post
cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes?
Yeah, your set up still had nothing to do with the punch, but your punch was just a statement. You need to word it differently yo. The concept was average at best, but it could have passed as good if you would have worded it differently.. 4/10

Overall - 20/50

Pictureperfect

oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag
turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag'
This was wack. The concept is played. If you're going to talk about shooting him you need to add in a little wittiness.. 3/10
avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge
cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up
Lmao. This is the best punch I've seen in this battle yet. Good concept, good wording.. 8/10
u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent
cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it
This shit is played. Talking about how high he can count? That shit isn't very good yo.. 4/10
so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'?
cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job?
Uhh.. This concept is a little played.. you worded it differently though, so it's pretty average.. 5/10
im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass
cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past
This was wack as fuck and you know it.. 2/10

Overall - 22/50

Vote - Pictureperfect