multis wer used quite well..... try keepin the bars near enufff the same length..... an may b try an base ur lyrics rown a main concept /topic

but overall good use of volcab... had a gud range
And flow woz good also

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p.s .......... drop a reply to dis plz....... return the favour.... tnx

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195552 <-- clik link

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