Aight, lemme break this down

Whyte Ave: I always liked your style because you keep it rather simple with a deep meaning though. But in this case, I thought you could've elaborated a bit more, went more into detail here and there. Imagery was nice, worded in a mysterious, serene yet powerful way combined with a good deal of emotion. Overall solid piece

Kein Witz: I really enjoyed your piece because it reminded me of old Latin poets such as Catullus and others. The sound expressions were an excellent add-on in my opinion, they gave the piece a quick, continous pace that symbolises the wrath of God. Imagery was very strong, I could picture every line in my mind, emotion was good as well but imagery was at a high!

Vote goes to Kein Witz, no hate to Whyte Ave, both wrote a nice piece!

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