Boooorrrrrrrrrring.
Boooorrrrrrrrrring.
Boooorrrrrrrrrring.
Boooorrrrrrrrrring.

Seriously....I got drowsy readin it.
LOL

Serious now.
Okay look....my advice to you to make sum iteresting or unbelievable things in your verses.Dun make some "To KIll a Mokingbird" shit .We wanna be enjoyed while readin sumtin.....we dun wanna have some opera.
Take Tupac's dear mama.
The line
"Huggin on my mama from a jail cell"

It was a very simple line but When ya first hear that line........you IMMIDEATELY say to urself"Damn".
Put sumtin like that.Get rid a dat boring shit

And be grateful I gave ya that much feedback.....considering I got beef with ya crew.(expect a verse later today about Livin Legendz too)

Keep ya head up and keep it gully
~1~