Voted For: MC Smoove

weak battle....

Smoove: you had sum wordplay n´a good flow...punchlinez...no....structure good...you forced sum rhymes in there too...keep improvin dawg n´start usin multis and expand your vocab...

Speats: your verse wasn´t any good dawg...you had a nice structure n´flow n´dat is the best thing I can say about your verse..you too forced sum rhymes in there...and your punchlinez mmm...nope.....your vocab was pretty simple dawg you hav to expand it .......but no worldplay dawg so....my vote is for smoove

both of you need to improve.....youl´ll get betta

smoove rtf on ma ax dogg battle..or I´ll erase the vote..sorry but thats how it is

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