Nice verse there homie.Flow was good throughout the whole verse.What would have made the verse better,in my opinion,was if ya described,in a little more detail,about what was goin through the guy's head before robbing the store.You stated his motives for doin it,but a sence of fear or confusion would have made it better.

Nice verse overall
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195795
(^could ya hit me back with a vote in my battle homie?)