My soul maybe set dormant but I ride without fail
So join me as I venture thru this notorious killers tale

........... yeh ic wer u cumin frm........ but if i took notorius out wen u read it u can spot abit of gap an the flow wudnt sound as fluid as it wus b4
but i cud change notorius for a word dat has a smaller syllable count ... so yep i agree but to sum xtent .......... peace

aight tnx gongshow an d rest for postin replies......... truly appriciate it ~1~

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