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Old 06-19-05, 02:11 PM   #47
Daubs
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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,

PRETTY DECENT OPENER.

Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,

NICE WORDPLAY, GOOD PUNCH.

Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,

HAHAHA, YEAH GOOD PUNCH, BASICISH BUT HIT HARD.

"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*

GOOD PERSONAL AND PUNCH.

O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...

GOOD WORDPLAY AND NICE CLOSER,

NICE VERSE.

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Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest

DIDNT RHYME BUT GOOD CONCEPT.

Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"

DECENT PERSONAL I GUESS, NOT FEELIN THE CONCEPT THOUGH.

This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me

NICE PERSONAL NOT A HARD HITTIN PUNCH.

Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match

HEARD A SIMILAR CONCEPT, BUT MEH DECENT CLOSER
NOT BAD VERSE.

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OK, THIS WAS ONE SIDED NOT ONLY BECAUSE OSB HAD MORE BARS BUT THE CREATIVITY IN HIS PUNCHES WERE BETTER AND HARDER HITTING.

OSB'S FLOWED BETTER ALTHOUGH STANZAS FLOW WAS ITE APART FROM THE FIRST BAR.

NO HATE

RTF IN SIG SO I DONT HAVE TO DQ THIS MAYNE!
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